Review: The Birthday by Mike McCormick

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Review of The Birthday by Mike McCormick (771 words)

Flash Fiction Online, December 2021 : Purchase or Read Online

Skilled language and quick action make this a fast paced story. Creating a fast paced story in flash is challenging in itself because it goes so fast anyway, being limited to under a 1000 words.

The concept itself is executed well and the ambiguous ending raises interesting questions. I also enjoyed the uncle's explanations.

 

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