Review: Ember by Anjali Patel

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Review of Ember by Anjali Patel (968 words)

Flash Fiction Online, Jul 2021 : Purchase or Read Online

Our unnamed narrator chose to go to a different land. A land that would accept them better than the land they came from, but they still dealt with a different sort of rejection.

Suppressing emotions are a quick fix, a temporary fix. Self preservation, however, is forever.

A very strong story. Turned out way more powerful than I anticipated. 

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